Saviour Self

I know i've already commented on this poem before, but i just wanted to write a bit more because i don't think i really expressed what i think about it properly and i basically advertised my poem on it (soooo sorry) i love this poem, its really deep and i love the title and your clever play on words. its another poem that showcases your amazing talent and i love the first stanza. anyways take care. xmollyxx

very sad, i'm sorry you feel that way, although i have at times to. i hope things get better.

this is great- i really like the line about your savior being your disease- genius. also love the message about depending on yourself. god sucks, he's never been there. oh and thanks so much for your truly uplifting comment about my poem, just posted a new one along the same line though not quite as good. anywayz i should stop rambling on. great poem, u're truly talented. xmollyxx

This is well written, rhymes, and has a great rythem. You are a great writer and keep up the good work. Nice job. Love it.

Love the form you wrote it in. Love the poem. Love your work. Yes there is much to love... <33