An Every Day Thought

by Sammie Moore   Aug 16, 2004


Have you ever looked and concentrated on your wrists?
Stared at the delicate blue veins that are madly pumping liquid life through your entire body?
Then imagined a serrated knife sliding, cutting away at the flesh... skin and the lining walls of those same blue veins.
Watching the crimson liquid of life flow onto your skin, and then off into a puddle on the floor.
Feeling your heart beat slow to a murmur of a hum.
Another everyday thought, and another shattered life.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Rocky

    not bad

  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    Yes I have!! Very descriptive and full of emotion... I loved it.. 5/5

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    Very powerful and descriptive. You would make a great author.

  • 20 years ago

    by Black Princess

    awsome... i can relate to most of your poems they're really touching... keep writting i'm looking forward to reading more of your work..
    Sarah

  • 20 years ago

    by Ben

    Brilliant!!!!! It is fantastic, i liked it lots and lots, it was short, sweet and oh so very very powerful, and to answer your question in the poem, yes, yes i have. very nice work!!!
    Ben

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