A very nice poem... I am not from America but the country I now live in is not the country I was born in, so in a way I can relate :) it a great piece of writing, I love your chose of words. Keep up the good work :)

I am litterly in aaawww.....

I come to you from the Northern border
And for that I am a dud
But if I slit both our wrists
I challenge you to find the difference in our blood

But this is supposedly the land of the free
Where nobody has to bleed or cry
I'm living in the land of the free
Some restrictions still apply

These were some of the best lines i have ever read!!! I know exactly how you feel.....This was so amazing ami, I gave you a 5!!!

Wooow...that was a long one. But dont get me wrong, its very very good. Your hard work really paid off.

--Bryce~

wow, i love those last two lines, they are soooo amazing. that was a really great poem, you've got a lot of talent, that was honestly one of the best poems i've read on here, and there are a lot of awemsome poems on this site. great work.

You are a fabulous writer! I love this soo much! Best I've ever seen! I hope you keep writing more and more and more! -Kristin

Ami-
every one of your poems I read just gets better and better.. I also loved the last two lines!! that was just an awesome poem... i hope u write more soon..
love always,
edina*