"The flowers I left for you will once die " I don't understand the usage of "once" in this sentence. Whenever you write always, you insert an apostrophe that doesn't need to be there. I wonder what the crow symbolizes. At first I thought the crow was death, and i suppose it still could be, but the second to last line made me wonder. I suppose at the end you are talking about your own death, and joining the deceased in...well actually I don't think this poem intends for there to be an afterlife, as "silence" sorta means... well "silence". Good poem.

I liked this poem what Sean Allen said is same way I think. Your poem was good though, I hope you write lots more!!:)

Very nicely written, I give you a "5" all the way. Timothy r

The thing that stood out most in this piece was the story, you told it so well. Including such raw emotion. The ending was extremely powerful. I could find nothing wrong with this piece. One of my favorite's of yours. :]
5/5

Tammie