thanx a lot for your comment but i'd just like to clarify a few things 1.How can u just say "its not considered killing before the first 4 months"? you cant just pick a date and say that "its not killing" so u wont feel guilty. Because I mean what if it becomes 4 months and a day, well its still okay right? Well then it becomes 4 months and a week and then...you get my drift...you cant just set a date and say anytime b4 that youre not killing your baby. you just cant... 2. Im not saying that everyone has abortions every year...im just saying to those people who DO do that and are just like whatever (i know plenty) to maybe stop and THINK of what theyre doing for once and 3. I know everyone makes mistakes and thats fine and i know sometimes its for the better but thats not who this poem is for.
Well thanx again
I hope more of you will share your views!

Great poem! I really really liked it. Abortion is one of the things I feel very very strongly about. I'm against it just so you know, and we really do need more poems like this for people to read! Very moving!

i believed in fixing mistakes, but i had a miscarriage when i turned 15 and it changed my life. i was so sad i never even got to tell it that i was sorry that it died bcuz i hadnt known, and was doing drugs which ended up killing it. i think that 4 months means nothing...it has a heartbeat after a couple of days, it has a soul and a destiny and we just throw it away without taking into consideration how much damage were really doing. im glad you have written this, everyone should understand the importance of a life.

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i really like your poem! it soo good.. i think it is important for people to understand the importance of life- as Marissa T said. i learned this form my uncle once- Abortions a life... not a choice! **and i totally agree w/ it** and that's sorta like your poem- i really like it

I am very much against abortion. Ever since I was a little girl and old enough to understand I hated it. When I was about 9 my sister had an abortion she was 14 and I hated her for the longest time. I couldn't understand how someone could do that. And now they have the partial abortion where they kill the baby full term right before it comes out. How stupid!! Anyway I really liked your poem. Very good job!

I was reading some of the comments and the first one on here says why would you give your baby up when there's enough unwanted kids out there. There are a lot of children with out homes but if you knew what you were talking about you would know that there are NO infants with out homes. There is a waiting list a couple years long for people waiting to get infants. SO many people can not have babies so they go to an adobtion agency and get put on a long list. Please you must know what you are saying before you just make your self look foolish.

I think you did a really good job on this poem and i hope people read it and think about what there doin before they abort there child i have a daughter and shes going to be 2 this weekend and im not married to her father and im still doin fine on my own i dont think its fair that some many people can say *Oops made a mistake lets get out of it* for every mistake there is consequences and i think everyone will pay in the end...good job on your poem and keep writin:)