Comments : Your my everything

  • 20 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    "You taste like honey and smell like rain"
    "My guardian angel My tortured screams"
    "Your an angel without wings, destined to fall"

    This piece is outstanding...truly phenomenal!! Your talent amazes me!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Amy

    Another wonderful poem, Amy!! Wonderful job! Another fave!!!
    Amy

  • 20 years ago

    by Danielle

    I don't even know waht to say for that poem... totally just brilliant... I can't even write comments for your poems anymore, because every single one of them were just amazing... I don't get how you write so welll... Ah I want to write good :-( I'm losin it! :-( Keep it up though, that was just beautiful. You don't know how much I relate.

    Much Love,
    Danielle
    XXOO

  • 20 years ago

    by Richard Bottary

    Truly amazing. Thanks for commenting on mine too. I knew you'd like that one. I think I'll be writing some more like that. I really enjoyed this piece...quite extraordinary.

  • 20 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOW...you put your words together so beautifuly!! it was truly magical! you are an amazing writer!

  • 20 years ago

    by MeL JoY

    wow beautiful poem!!