that was a really good poem and sad, i dont want you to die :D because I love you because your one of my bestest friends!!! @--->---- keep writing

Your poems are sooo powerful..You write with alot of emotion!!! After I read your poems I feel soo sad, But your poems are great!!!!! I can really tell you put ALot of feeling into them!!! Wonderful!!
much love
elizabeth.

Hi brittany, Nice poem. I know how you feel. But thanks for commenting on my poem. Love ya Kala

This was a amazingly written poem, You know ur style has alot of emotion and thought within each word....5/5
take care
Scooby

wow! REALLY good poem, this part especially:

trying hard not to unveil
underestimating my pain
cringing at the thought of never being sane
blood hitting the ground

i like it the most, though i'm not sure, why, it just sounds really good, great work! 5/5