I tried to make this poem sound as dark as I possibly could. Never wrote one like this before. I hope you enjoy it.

Whoa! This has gotta be one of my fave poems ever! Oh thats was really cool to mention me & my garden lol. Keep up the amazing work!

Lol i just read it again. Even better the second time :)

I knew you would like this one Amy*. Your garden inspired me to write this. So all in all...I guess you can say your inner garden is apart of my inner valley.

Hey..This Poem Is Like Amazing Beyong Belief...Both Richard And Amy* Are So Talented Poets ...Keep Up With It All..Very Dark..Very Eeree..Love It
Love Hailey

well well well this is my new fave poem of the month!!! This is amazing like im awe and speechless which are both extremely rare for me! You exceeded yourself painting the picture of dark imagery every line draws the reader in and you did a stunning job putting this together - well wortha five - more like a 10 if you ask me...
Much Luv Eirisa xoxo

that was awesome, it made me never want to see that place, that's for sure, great detail.. really captured the mood.. keep it up

whoa this freaking awesome shit XD lol i loved it, really creepy ..very discriptive! some of the best works i've seen..really! :) keep writing, take care <3333
-Mortalidaga
xxxx

Damn, I am super impressed. I can't believe that is the first poem you have really written like that. That was freaking awesome man. That was totally dark, and the way you explained it, was like I could see it myself. You got some skills, you got a whole lot of skills, Great job. One of the best that I have read.

Wow! That was incredible. Very surreal. I felt as if I was there. I saw everything in detail. Very nice job.
I loved it.
David

After all the love you got i doupt u need to hear this again, but wow...yeah absolutly amazing, one of the best i've read ~ really painted a vivid picture, v. sensual, your choice of words and metaphores was spectacular, i could go on all day ~ thank you for a beautiful peice, keep sharing. chck out mine sum time ~ rose xox

Wow that was amazing!!!!!! excellent work

That truly was an amazing poem. A job well done.

OMG!! This was a great poem! i loved the garden and this was just as good! Great job! Keep writing!!! Loved it, it was a dark poem and it also just makes you think. Great job.!!!!!!
I give it a 5!!!

tHIS POEM IS UNBELIEVABLE !!! I CANT BELIEVE HOW AWSOME YOU WRITE !!!!

"Clouds made of tears
Victims forever cry.
Playfully vanish and appear
Raining an eerie lullaby"

This poem rocked....but this stanza alone was my favorite!! This was a very dark and twisted piece...great job!!

Tthat is bloody excellent, extreme and superb imagery created with the most descriptive and perfect words used, by God this is a tremendous poem.

Dumbstruck an Awesome...ya those are the words

you are tallanted

Wow. This was excellent! I loved it! Keep it up and take care of yourself!

~Grace