by David Munoz Aug 18, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
From the first time I saw you |
by Amy
Aww! Great poem!! You're such a great writer!! I love this poem!! |
hey, my ex boyfriend aka is my best friend now...i changed for him because i new it would be better if i was a different person..although i think he didn't notice...i changed not just for him but for a better life...but he was a reason to start but wasn't the reason to finish it up...that was all up to me..and sumtimes i believe that my life would be different if it weren't for meeting him....thats why i commented i wanted to say that change is sumtimes good....good luck with that gurl okay..anyways i will end it here...good poem Lys |
wow...that was so beautiful and full of emotion. i loved it, great job! |
by wcgirl02
wow what a talent you have.....lucky angel...keep it up!!! |
by Joy
Another masterpiece! Well done! I LOVE your work. You're DEFINITELY going on my faves list! This poem touched me in two ways...one was the guy trying to make himself a better person so the girl would love him...and the feeling the girl must have for this guy to be doing this all for her. Great work! |