If i were to die

by little girl all alone   Aug 18, 2004


If i were to die tonight
would u care?

would u ask yourself
how would i dare?

would u think
i was being unfair?

would the death of me
be hard to bare?

if i were to die tonight and go to heaven
remember it was u who drove me there.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Hope Blitz

    i thought that was really good just loose one the the "fair"s and then it would be perfect i especially like the last verse. Thankx so much for rating my poem , good job teedeehee ... BiE

    --hope

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