Most people think that you shouldnt put too many rhymes in a poem but i love them, i really like whats behind this poem, as i hae grown away from my family i can relate to it. love it also :)

LOVELY POEM, WELL DONE.

aww babe , i really do now how u feel , great poem by da way !!! as i sed ny time u wana tlk just email me k gal ,luvlidxxXxx

Thank you im so freekn pissed off at my sister though, she totally blew off this poem she told me that i didnt mean it and crap like that, it hurt, it hurt real bad.