that was so awesome!! i cant even describe how good. you are so talented, everything i have read of yurs i have loved. i cried while i read that, thats how much of an affect it had. amazing job.

wow that was good it gave me shivers it was written very well just like all ur work

gr8 work, i loved this one too !

i didnt know i was crying that was brill and im sorry about your friend if it is a true story

i didnt know i was crying that was brill and im sorry about your friend if it is a true story

A poem this great deserves to be broken into segments. It builds the anticipation. No words can express how excellent this poem really is. Yet another divine talent.

DAM this blew me away well written amazingly descriptive piece of poetry - im off to look for Part 1 thanks so much for sharing your talent with us your a true artist...xoxo

brill i read that again and uderstood it that is absulutly exsantlent keep writing

Part one gave me chills part two made me cry. keep it up

That gave me chills ... it was so sad, but so very well written. You're an amazing writer.

¤!!!!nice work!!!!¤

wow..thats incredible..i have no idea if that story is true (that part about raping) but if it is..that's so sad..and im so sorry..this is a beautiful poem, both parts..you did amazing work..keep it up <33
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Beautiful, unlike any poem i have read dealing with this topic. This is one of the very best poems on this site. You make the reader feel the emotions you put into it. We feel the pain and want to cry, we feel sad for what happene. It is perfect. It could not have been done better. You are a wonderful writer, keep it up. Take care

omg... that was such a beautiful story :-(

*tear*

This is an excellent poem i have never seen better. Please keep up the good work!

Most unbelievingly this poem is actually better than the first. I never woulda thought that possible. Excellent. Very chilling too. Great work.

It's a very intence Poem It's beautifull..

Sucj an awsome poem, the pain youve been through... its amazing babe, you poem brought tears to my eyes

Love ya!

i love this poem. i read both parts. its amazingly written. it brought tears to my eyes. you are very talented. this poem is definantly a 5! keep on writting