such an ending to such a trajic story! you have real talent...

Beautiful. Both part one and two. You are a great writer.
Take Care,
Hannah M.

this poem is so sad i send my deepest feelings. i will keep you in my prayers.

You know what u should have done u should have put that the little girl saw the boy and were together in heaven but yeh witout that it was good. i loved it keep writin 5/5

This poem both parts were just great i really loved them