For some odd reason, this reminds me of a girl i used to, and still am, in love with.. im not sure if i like the straight out emotions written in the first couple lines.. i like it a lil more subtle without saying specifically what it is or feels but stiull gettin ur point across.. i dunn0 if im makin ne sense or helpin.. but im tryin.. 4/5 on this one.. lookin for more,.. thx for the praise on my work.. pZ