Woah that is a great poem, one of the best love poems i have ever read and i am not lieing, that is awesome

fantastic-what more can i say!!

Hey I like this one the most, it has a catchy little flow to it and it was very well rhymed, plus I like the title, nice work.

--Bryce~

oh wow this is an incrdible poem, i love it! I like how you've combined it with fairytales and dreams. its got a smooth flow and it truly a talented piece of writing

xxoo,
alysse

pretty good stuff....loved the concept

Very good work. It is lovely - and dreamy.

WOW i've got shivers that what so beautiful. I don't know what to say, everything about that was perfect. The way you described you two as lovers was so touching and then how it was only a dream was quite sad. Very well done, lovely poem! 5/5

hey kaytee, another great poem i'm starting to really like your work
great job!
jemma xxx