by Bryce Ellner Aug 19, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
first love
I remember back a year ago |
I hate to say it, but with the way I am.. That could have easily been about me :( |
awwwww wow, great piece! i loved it, well done!:)beanxx |
by Danielle
And to critique it, i thought that you did a great job on it, it was very nicely written, and i could tell that you really cared for this gil... good emotion |
by Danielle
I'm sorry someone has hurt u that way. I'm going through it as well. Best friends for such a long time, and we went further. he totally broke my heart in ways it's never been before :'( Please be strong for yourself, it's the only way. |
by Sean Allen
Ouch that is sad. If you want a critique on this poem, I'll give it my best shot. Sometimes the lines got really long when you wanted to finish a thought, and that might have ruined a rhythm, but personally I feel that the rhythm of this poem isn't of paramount importance. This was touching, and I think it is a great farewell letter. |