My Farewell To You (A True Story)

by Bryce Ellner   Aug 19, 2004


I remember back a year ago
When you first said you liked me
It was over the Internet I remember
Which was probably not a good place for it to be.

It started with our holding hands
When Holly got on us for that.
We were coming home from a football game
Not far from where we lived at.

And then came our dance
It was your birthday party too.
And we slow danced strait through every single song
And I finally got to say "I Love You".

I remember our first kiss too
We were watching movies in the living room.
And from that simple kiss I was in heaven
And every night after I'd hope to get another one and soon.

- - -

That day we broke it off
I couldn't help but cry.
I thought that you were going to be the one.
But I guess now I was trying to live a lie.

I wondered for the next few weeks,
Hoping that there was some way to get you back.
But in the end my dream was just a dream.
And I couldn't lie to myself anymore, thats a fact.

You were gone
And I still didn't know why.
You never really told me
Why you let my heart die.

- - -

Now I hear from your cousin,
That you're going out with someone new.
Someone I thought once you used to hate.
But in fact it was someone more like you.

I can't change the past,
And I've settled that with my broken heart.
What feelings I had for you are gone now
And now we've grown even farther apart.

So this is my farewell letter to you.
And I just want you to know
Even if you did break my heart in the end,
You did help my figure out which way I truly needed to go.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Karin Erlacher

    I hate to say it, but with the way I am.. That could have easily been about me :(

  • 20 years ago

    by _the_punk_kid_

    awwwww wow, great piece! i loved it, well done!:)beanxx

  • 20 years ago

    by Danielle

    And to critique it, i thought that you did a great job on it, it was very nicely written, and i could tell that you really cared for this gil... good emotion

  • 20 years ago

    by Danielle

    I'm sorry someone has hurt u that way. I'm going through it as well. Best friends for such a long time, and we went further. he totally broke my heart in ways it's never been before :'( Please be strong for yourself, it's the only way.

  • 20 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Ouch that is sad. If you want a critique on this poem, I'll give it my best shot. Sometimes the lines got really long when you wanted to finish a thought, and that might have ruined a rhythm, but personally I feel that the rhythm of this poem isn't of paramount importance. This was touching, and I think it is a great farewell letter.