i doubt i can ever write anything as good as this. the story was well told. rhyming scheme was flawless and it was very very good. this will be a fave! take care:)

That was a very good poem. Keep up the good writing.

WOW...im like in tears. this is absolutely beautiful. this is just what i needed. i feel this way about a friend of mine who i dated for 3 monthes but been friends with for 3 years and now i know i am not the only person to ever feel this way. amazingly well written. email me sometime and maybe we can talk...pahoney88@excite.com

WOW is right. This poem was amazing because it represents a feeling I am all too familiar with. Great job. I'm sorry you felt that way, too.

I know that feeling. Check out my poem "My broken heart" it's kinda similar

Very, Very good!

Very well written. Love is very interesting... isnt it.

Wow.. This poem really touched me.. I know how you feel.. It was really awesome.. Loved reading it..

Ouch that is sad. If you want a critique on this poem, I'll give it my best shot. Sometimes the lines got really long when you wanted to finish a thought, and that might have ruined a rhythm, but personally I feel that the rhythm of this poem isn't of paramount importance. This was touching, and I think it is a great farewell letter.

I'm sorry someone has hurt u that way. I'm going through it as well. Best friends for such a long time, and we went further. he totally broke my heart in ways it's never been before :'( Please be strong for yourself, it's the only way.

And to critique it, i thought that you did a great job on it, it was very nicely written, and i could tell that you really cared for this gil... good emotion

awwwww wow, great piece! i loved it, well done!:)beanxx

I hate to say it, but with the way I am.. That could have easily been about me :(