gr8 poem !

Brilliant use of words a real good poem thanks for sharing it with us take care bek x x x

That is so very touching. Awesome poem.

Thats awsome!I could totally understand i got friends whose mom had em at age 13 and yeah its a little shocking but they did whats done ya know?...I get what your trying to say and i thought this was a great poem!! It sounded like a jerry springer thing..lol...I thought this was just..I don't know it was GREAT! nice job,,keep ur head high!

Really awesome...

I have to agree with you there, I don't like the way people treat teen mum's or even girls who have had to make the decision whther to keep it or not. People don't think how hard it really is for them.

i was about to cry i love this poem i have one similar to this one except i was only 17 and daddy was no man lol you know so holla back and keep writtin very smart to love your work

aww thats so sweet of u to write that for ur mum..I gave birth to my daughter a month before i turned 16 n i kno exactly how ur describing in ur poem..i enjoyed readin it ur in my faves :)

x..Luv Keri..x