Aaron,

I have had a long distant relationship with someone that lasted years, but it ended because he cheated. I want you to know that, being this young you have to live your life and make the best of it. Let the person you know how you feel often,... There came moments in my time of relationship, where I wondered just the way you did.. and it drove me crazy... be open with her *if your poem is not fictional* Be open with her and tell her what pains you, the more you are open the healthier your relationship will be. Good job on the poem. a five.

Love, Libby

Great Poem, i know how you feel kid. Keep it up

Man, if that poem doesn't get a great score then something is wrong. I thought that was one of the better poems that I have looked at on the site. Very impressive. I know a few people going through a long distance relationship, and it is hard. There has to be a very deep love to make those last. And to me, it sounds like you do have that very deep love. Great poem, Keep it up.

p.s Good luck with your girl. If she feels the same way you do, then you guys are gonna have forever together.

WHOA this made me cry - i hope my man feels the same now we have moved apart and giving the long distance thing ago - this truly made my heart smile well worth a five

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Hi Aaron!
You know I love all your poems but this one really got to me! I'm sorry we haven't been talking much lately, but don't you ever forget that I love you!

good poem....it really hit home with me. The girl i love had to move a thousand miles away and i can feel right where your poem came from! great job!