by Karrie
Wow that poem was awesome! You really have some talent, I don't know where you come up with it lol. but keep writing I love reading your stuff, it's really moving. |
by Bryan
Wow, that was a super sad poem. But I thought it was great. I think you are an inspirational writer. That poem shows me a lot about your talent, and about your heart. Keep writing Danielle, I really like the way you put your words together. Great job. |
That was a very sad yet beautiful poem. I really liked this one and it touched my heart. Great job! |
awwwwww!!!! that is sooo sad!! :*( its so beautifully well written..but its very sad..i could feel the emmtion and i could picture the little things like the little boy writing and the mom upstairs crying and stuff like that :(* it was beauitful, keep writing <333 |
That was unbelievable. Definately the first of its class. You have a pure talent for poetry. Keep it up, I really liked this. |
by Unloved ♥
WOW that was so well put. I loved it!! Yes you do have an amazing talent you really do. |
by Chelsey
This was so amazing!!!! I mean i wish i could of thought of this! You have got some talent to write something as great as this! And i just thought it was amazing..It brung tears to my eyes cause im a very caring person and i feel bad you have to watch your mom like this..WEll i hope God/Santa heard this and brings happiness into your moms life! God Bless and keep your head high! GREAT JOB! |
by loznal
that was very good x excellent well done xxx |
by mike
exellent poem |
by JS
wow... that poem is a work of art. keep up the good work |
by Krillin
The best one of yours that I've read(in my humble opinion) so far. Definatly worth a 5. |
This is a truly amazing poem!!! I love'd it. It sent chills up and down my spine, and it brings tears to my eyes! Keep up the good work! |
by jescelle
i wish i could write poems like you do............... |
ive wrote a letter kind of similar to this one, but really yours is much better. xox |
wow that poem is really sad but really well done- brought a tear to my eye, keep it up! |
by Elynnka
Very emotional, hope it's not true... |
This is awesome, one of the best yet saddest poems I've come across of late. Where'd u get the inspiration? Good write, keep it up, 5/5 |
by awww
I love it... i felt it so much... it made me cry... one of the best ive ever read... keep it up |
by Lady C
Oh...jesus that was good! It made me feel so sad, but in a good way though (as in a good poem, not as in a good situation..ehe) |
by Wallace
Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5. |