by Rebekah
Beautifully written! Loved it! |
by Michelle
I love you truly too sweetheart...oh...we've just gotten back from the movies (your sci-fi one!) ;)and I had to read this again...it brought tears to my eyes earlier this afternoon...just remembering all of the love that I've felt and am of COURSE still feeling and always will...and to feel that love returned from you is the most unbelievable thing I've ever known. I want to spend my whole life with you,and it's already in the works sweetheart...I have to mention a couple of things, but I loved this entire poem..I would quote it all, but that wouldn't make much sense now would it???...I just mean that each part is very significant to me..to US..but I had to pick a couple so here I go:..Kind of sums it up doesn't it..the revealing the past, sharing our present, and planning our future...perhaps the simplest lines of the poem but yet so all-encompassing!...fervor, RESOLVE(you BET baby!!)...zeal..yep..all of those!...O' Hare airport..one of those life-defining moments that neither one of us will ever forget..and we have so many of those now..ALREADY! ..imagine in 50 years babe! ;)...awwwww..and you mention my VERY favorite time of each and every day now ...'night sweetheart, all snuggled in tight..and we're getting ready to go up to bed together now..it feels so unbelievably wonderful to have your arms and legs all wrapped around me like that...makes me happier than anything...and then the end..this magical journey...you've said that right! The most magical thing that's ever happened to me, and probably ever will...we're a family now and that makes me SO very happy...we're just missing Dylan..give him a year or so!! ;) I love you so much sweetheart...have almost since the very beginning(we weren't 'just' friends for long now were we!!!??) and will my entire life...kisses, cuddles and LOVE...always...Mich (ps..this is my new favorite baby)kiss, kiss. |
by Jamie
Wow, you are a great writer. I hope i am still writing when i get a little older. Peaople liek you inspire me to keep writitng. Wow, just so passionite. I would love if you could vote or comment on a couple of my poems...i'll take critasism too...i just love to write, i may not be good, but i love it with all my heart and it is the only way i can release some of my pain without physically hurting myself...oh and by the way, i am jealous, i have never been in love yet if you are wonderign why i have no love poems...i only write from experience and from the heart so i can't very well write abotu that yet. Thanks again. Jamie |
by Mark Harris
That was so awesome! And I can see ur g/f is wrapped too. Good work mate! :D |