Wow i dont know if something is wrong with my browser or a mistake was made when posting this poem, still you were kind enought o comment on my poem and i have looked forward to commenting on yours! This is good, well a good start i think all i can see is...A friend like you is sincere
when I was sad you brought me happiness
you made me smile when I was crying
there were moment in my life when I was completely lost
you took my hands and brought me back to the real world
All I can give you back is a simple thank you
Along with my friendship
and HUGE space at the bottom - which means to me its not finished??!! I think its a wonerful start to an amazing poem let me know if youd like a hand :o)

Lol! Eirisa she's so funny..well thats what i saw to but so far it was awsome! So much emotion! And i thought it was brilliant..thanks for commenting on my work too! Good Job!

OMG I LOVED IT!!!!!!!! I need help on a poem and since ur really really talented could u help me??? my email is SuperGirl_77@hotmail.com