by Freakie_D Aug 20, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
A gray sky, |
by BrokenMisery
WOW! That is awsome! your stuff is REALLY GOOD!!! Better than mine! A little tip is don't push the rhymes- alive and hive, that was the only part that felt like u were pushing to find one. but all the same that is a GREAT job and you are Awsommer! lol |
by Stacy
i really like that.. it sounds just like me, its really good to know that theres more people out there like me |
by Freakie_D
Thanks you guys it means alot that you guys like ths poem its one of my favorites |
a beautiful peice, tragik but beautiful :)beanxx |