by Kevin J Aug 20, 2004
category :
Fun, humor /
about life
Have U ever stopped to think but then |
by Kelly
LOL! funny i like the things you write there all pretty cool!keep up the good work once more! |
by David
I agree with Ann Marie, I love the clever use of words and rhymes. I am not to comfortable with the last stanza.. it seems out of place. I would suggest continue the poem, and not place the attention on the reader/comments. |
excellent! I love the "tongue-twisterishness" of this (at least the 1st two stanzas) |