excellent! I love the "tongue-twisterishness" of this (at least the 1st two stanzas)

Great work!

I agree with Ann Marie, I love the clever use of words and rhymes. I am not to comfortable with the last stanza.. it seems out of place. I would suggest continue the poem, and not place the attention on the reader/comments.
Just continue your thoughts on stupid thoughts. woot!

LOL! funny i like the things you write there all pretty cool!keep up the good work once more!