Heh, I might have to try this paragraph poem thing, looks kind of interesting. Great job, another good poem.

--Bryce~

VERY GOOD POEM.

Oh my that was beautiful. The rhyming in it was perfect and the descriptions were lovely. The second stanza was my favorite. "Your beauty surpasses that of a goddess.
Your wonderful laugh is sweeter than a birds" they are two very beautiful lines. You have a great talent with love poems. Well done.

Aww so romantic and beautiful. I loved it! =)

~Grace

That was awesome dude...I especially liked the ending. excellent write;)

Another billiant poem. its very sweet and heartfelt. i love the part about her beauty surpassing a goddesses. wow. genius. xmollyxx

Just beautiful!!!