Thats beautiful and touching. I know what its like to lose a good friend. 5.0, perfect score.

--Bryce~

The way you have turned a recent trauma into a poem is commendable. What brings a person to take their own lives will always be a `mystery` to the living. My heart goes out to the parents. 5/5

So much emotion, so sorry to hear of your loss of your friend. Well written.

really a sad story and i'm sorry for the lost of your friend. those who we love should be in a happier place now. beautiful poem. take care

i love this poem! keep writing its awesome!

wow that was really really good, and i am so sorry i know that it is so hard when you lose someone to suicide

Omg...that was so beautifully written. I feel so sorry for what happened to your friend. This truly touched my heart. Thank you for sharing it.

OMG thanks everyone who voted and commented, it really means a lot to me. And I'm sure it means a lot to Electra too. I know she's up there in Heaven smiling down on the world right now. I showed the poem and all of your comments to Electra's best friend, she started crying. All of your words, and mine, really touched her. Thanks so much again everyone, this poem has really helped this dark time in my life become just a bit brighter!

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brilliant poem. i won't say i "know how you feel" because everyone takes things differently, but i have been through that. i have lost 3 close friends to suicide and it is more painful then anything. if you would like to read one of my poems about any of them, they are "peter" "peter's suicide" and "how could you?". but yours is much better. you have a lot of talent to be able to put a painful experience like that into such beautiful poetry. i am sorry for your loss.
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Very touching poem. A guy from my school recently committed suicide as well, and it's a big reality check. You feel so helpless, and no one ever really learns the true reasons.

A job well done.

God bless.

its rele good but i found it difficult to read im sowi u lost a friend and the message is a strong onr thank you i voted u good please you take time to read my poem its called the scare of 2004 and i love you goodbye thank you x

its rele good but i found it difficult to read im sowi u lost a friend and the message is a strong onr thank you i voted u good please you take time to read my poem its called the scare of 2004 and i love you goodbye thank you x

This poem is really good. I live in a small town where everybody knows everybody. In the past 7 months we have had 9 teenage deaths along with accidents that have put several other teens in ICU. 2 of those deaths have been because of suicide. It is so hard to lose someone you care about especially when it is too suicide. The people who commit suicide don't realize the hurt they are leaving behind, along with the guilt of not realize that person was hurting.

that is such a great poem, so sad, its amazing how many people think that suicde is the answer (i have to admit, i 've wanted to at times) but i saw there were ppl that did care. and i didnt want to hurt them, great poem,

Wow this is soo said. Again im so very sorry for your lose.

This is so sad. So many people commiting suicide but it seems like you are the only one dealing with the fact that you lost someone. Your in my prayers.

[poem wise--- I never read any of your work b4 and well the 3 that i read so far impressed me very much. Great work.]