Nice work, Rebekah. I enjoyed this one. It has an uplifting and cheerful theme.

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Wow, that was really good! Very nicely written and it flowed very well. I love the ending the most, captures it all. This was a great one, keep it up. :)

Thanks you lot it means loads that you left comments x x

really liked this poem

This is a kewl poem. It really uses your imagination. Great job! Keep up the great work!

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Awww i lyk diz poem... plus i luv rainbow lowl.. i luv ol colors.. haha.. notn... it wz rily great..5/5 :)