Good write, but the flow was a little ify at times! Sort of here and there.........

good job though very unique,
ann

Again, wow...you are an amazing writer.

Good work.
I loved the story of adam and eve,.. and you just applied it, and showed the romantical point of view all wrapped up with nice words and shiny metaphores.
I envy this piece of work :)
Best wishes
Roy

Another great poem... beautiful job 5/5

Thank you for commenting on my poem, I like this piece right here a lot. Mostly for the images, I can everything, and feel the emotion even if they are silent.

Simply a masterpiece........

Wow. this has great flow and much passion! great job!

Amazing poem. keep up the great work. very unique...

Oh! This is so very amazing.
The flow was beautiful & the words were just flawless.

I love the contradicting in this peice.

You have lots of talent =)

5

Again a really great poem. alotho not really my kinda cookie. but the word choice was brilant and the flow amzing. a great poem ala in all a 5/5 again

Good, very good. I loved especially the first two stanza's. I have to say I am Agnostic and so don't find myself particularly drawn to poetry with a reference to a God of any sort in it, however I guess it fitted in with the poem. I see what you meant by not understanding the poem without background knowledge though. Also, I'd like very much to know why you changed the rhyme pattern in the last two stanzas?

Really awesome poem overall, will definately be reading some more!

Sole. x

I liked this one alot =]
your someone who'd make my boyfriend wish he could say such sweet things.

Wow great poem!

Beautifully written. i love how each line rhymed perfectly. i loved it. 5/5 most definately. great job mike

*Val

So now eve of ur life..... this is excellent..amazing..brilliant..like u capture me by ur title then u drown me with the deepness of ur word choice..

5.5

GOOD POEM

I really likes your poems.. hope you can give a tip

The poem is faithful....i love the flow and the sentimentality...thumbs up