The Goat and My Daughter *There IS a point to this...*

by Joy   Aug 21, 2004


Here I have a story about my DAUGHTER,
She married an INTELLIGENT GOAT,
They met in a JUNGLE,
She saw him from afar in a boat,
While eating her CHEESEBURGER.
She noticed he was eating a yellow oat.

After awhile she became BORED,
So she turned her attention to some wild bison's,
Still bored she developed a FRIENDSHIP with the goat,
So they got a marriage license,
They used a PAPER CLIP to clip it together,
Then they celebrated by DANCING and eating chicken from Tyson's.

**Okay....I submitted this for NO good reason. It was this thing in English class, we picked cards from hats and had to use the words on them in a poem, using two stanzas, and having a 2,4,6 rhyming pattern. The capitalized words are the ones I had to use. I know bison's isn't a word...but OH WELL. Its MY poem and DON'T make fun of it! Lol. Sorry...just give me your point of view on it as if you were a kindergarten teacher... ;)**

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  • 20 years ago

    by Joy

    Well...my teacher gave me a 10/10 on it, *Go straight A's, go!*, and she wrote the following....

    Excellent!
    Great rhyming words in the 2nd stanza!

    So all in all I guess it was good!
    Thanks for the feedback,
    .:jOy:.

  • 20 years ago

    by nikki

    its interesting... lol i like it. and as for "bisons" as my friend dave says "its a word, its just not gramatically correct" tops poem lol.
    xnikkix

  • 20 years ago

    by Krillin

    Umm It's different. Just wondering what your teacher thought of it

  • 20 years ago

    by Ten Feet Tall

    lol....i remember having to do that same thing. oi. well anyways, so it was interesting, there's really no way it wouldn't be... and it was funny. nice job with this

  • 20 years ago

    by Rachel Ellison

    awe that was cute! i know what your talking about when you say it was for english, i did things like that yours was pretty good though mine always sucked lol