haha made me laugh it made no sence and i thought it was grate :D

intresting and it made a plesent change. well done.

i agree! thought it had a catchy title. very creative of you! take care:)

awe that was cute! i know what your talking about when you say it was for english, i did things like that yours was pretty good though mine always sucked lol

lol....i remember having to do that same thing. oi. well anyways, so it was interesting, there's really no way it wouldn't be... and it was funny. nice job with this

Umm It's different. Just wondering what your teacher thought of it

its interesting... lol i like it. and as for "bisons" as my friend dave says "its a word, its just not gramatically correct" tops poem lol.
xnikkix

Well...my teacher gave me a 10/10 on it, *Go straight A's, go!*, and she wrote the following....

Excellent!
Great rhyming words in the 2nd stanza!

So all in all I guess it was good!
Thanks for the feedback,
.:jOy:.