by David C Aug 21, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
My first non-rhyming poem. Please give advice! |
This is ExCCeleNt. I really like the description and the passion behind it. great work. xmollyxx |
by Kevin J
I think you did a good job. I've tried writing poems without rhyming and it's really really hard...really:p I admire anyone that can, and you seemed to pull it off nicely;) |
by Amy
Wow that was amazing work! Keep it up |
by Gracie Jo
I liked this poem a lot. Sometimes in order to get your feelings out you will have to write a non-rhyming poem. It was very good, keep it up! =) |
by N J Thornton
That is a lovely unrhymed poem. In unrhymed poems I feel because you don't have the rhyming to help with the flow and emotions, you have put a lot in yourself, this is what you did. I loved your descriptions and the emotions in the poem. I thought it was a beautiful love poem. |