Just as good as the first. Glad you explained at the bottom since, well I was kinda lost on that . Prolly shouldn't have admitted that...lol. Yeah, still can't believe no one's voted or commented on them...must be lazy like me but I still did.
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I really like this group of poems that your writing. In this poem I really liked

It was calling her
She was forced to answer.
The darkness drew her in
And her life fell even faster.

I think thats my favorite part in this poem. Great Job writing it :)

I totally understood that. Great joB