by SamiJo Aug 22, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I really didn't know you all that well |
by *Elizabeth*
wow! sad, but good! |
by Sean Allen
I know you want criticism on most of your poems, but as a rule I don't really critique poems that are emotional and personal, because who gives a damn about rhyme and rhythm and poetic devices and symbolism when your friend is hurt. All I can say is I thought the rhyming was fairly natural, and that the rhythm was pretty consistent, and that the lack of poetic devices is understandable because this poem is a "talking" poem, as if you are addressing someone directly. |