My Room

by Jacqui Armstrong   Aug 22, 2004


Sitting in a room so white,
Lights shine off walls it is so bright.
Plain white tiles on the floor,
Padlock holding shut the door.

Sitting in a corner so tight,
I close my eyes to dream tonight.
Of the life I lived before,
I went insane and here's the score.

An empty, plain and cold white room,
Shut away is all my gloom.
And all my dreams that I once had,
All until I went mad.

I wake up early in the morning,
The room so white shows no warning.
Through the small gap in my door,
Is passed my meals and not much more.

Sitting in a room so white,
Lights shine off walls it is so bright.
Plain white tiles on the floor,
Padlock holding shut the door.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Syn

    Great poem.... its so off the wall, i love it!!

    5/5

    Also i have a new poem out for the contest..

    Lost With Time (Part Two)

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, This one really touched me. Only because my dad is taking me to our docter to tell him I cut. I am very scared as to what is going to happen now. And being put into a place like this, Is something I really fear. So you did a great job on this. If it was not based on true events. Then you used a great POV! Keep writing! 5/5

    - Natalie x-x

  • 19 years ago

    by kiesha

    That's a really good poem. Did that really happen to you, or did you just write it? Either way I thought it was good. I think it's awesome that you got recognized for it. Good job. Take care.
    ><> Kiesha

  • 20 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    i went and read my poem out today with three other people from my age group unfortunality i did not win but i am a runner up i have a certifiacte and a poem book so maybe next year with another poem:D

  • 20 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    i entered this poem ina competition at my school for poetry day and i have been takin into the semi finals find out more on thursday :D

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