I really like this poem. You've done a really good job describing things.

I read your comment on the poem I just submitted... Are you okay? If you need to talk sometime, you can e-mail me.

This poem was really sad, but extremely well expressed and written. It was very original, and I loved how you described the knife as your best friend. If you ever need to talk, my email is robyn_ohio@hotmaiil.com. I loved this piece. Kudos

I really like this one. It switches you on emotions such as the first 4 verses your poem portrays a sense of misery. Then the next 3 verses you show sign of surviving the darkness and probability that you can survive. Finally the end of the poem takes the feeling of misery back as well as the felling that the cure is out of hands reach.

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Life comes with it a mixture of beauty and the beast. lol. I enjoyed my time on your page. You are a great writter!!

This is a great poem hun, it really made me think cuz i know what you're going through and i know i have a friend who ive grown apart from and i wish i hadnt and this may be something to help me talk to her again. if you ever need a friend to talk to you can email me
--trevor--

your such a great writer please tell me what i can do to write as well as you do! keep it up xoxoxoxo

Omg, that was so touching... i loved it =)

Stay Strong ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

Wow that was very sad... I loved how you didnt say what/who the friend was all the way through the poem until the very end, but you hinted throughout what it may be.. I guessed it right though. This poem brought a tear to my eye and I am very sorry if it is true. This poem was beautiful nice work.. thanx for your comment on my poem "Running Out Of Knives" it ment a lot to me and I am sorry that I didnt comment sooner.

~Hayley J~

Wow that was very sad... I loved how you didnt say what/who the friend was all the way through the poem until the very end, but you hinted throughout what it may be.. I guessed it right though. This poem brought a tear to my eye and I am very sorry if it is true. This poem was beautiful nice work.. thanx for your comment on my poem "Running Out Of Knives" it ment a lot to me and I am sorry that I didnt comment sooner.

~Hayley J~

Amazing as always! xx