REALLY LIKED THIS, WELL DONE.

now that is a great poem, you know for a 13 yr old you have a hell of a lot of talent.

Nice write, its simple and easy to read, very effective :) Very interesting rhyming style, sometimes it feels like it doesn't rhyme but the flow is still great :) Love your work as always :) take care.

I liked the way you've made a poem about all the fiction that have been said about death... if you know what I mean ;) well done on the poem!