Well written. I see you are greatly tlented. You express the feelings very well. If it your own life experience, hope that things become better for you. Wish you luck and happiness. Take care. Love, Trincy.

Very good poem.. You showed how you felt very clearly... You have great talent.. And thank you for taking your time and commenting on my poem thank you a lot.. Take care -liz-

That poem was incredible. It was so sweet and it sucks that people are jealous and try to get between people. You have to live your own life; it's hard to do that if you're always in someone else's business. Everyone has dealt with something like this. I know I have and kind of still am right now. I was lucky enough to have saved messages on my phone to prove my innocence...lol...Anyway great poem. 5!