The Gravestone

by Rebekah   Aug 22, 2004


Counting the days,
Counting the hours,
When you left me,
Replacing the flowers,
Is this so necessary,
Talking to a stone,
Let's just face it,
I'm all on my own,
Looking around,
So many departed,
All with fresh flowers,
Us left brokenhearted.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so very sad, yet such a beautiful read.
    The depth in this is overwhelming.
    Great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by TaKe Me As I Am

    Wow! very powerful.. definitely written to touch the hearts of anyone who reads it. we have all lost a loved one, and i think that your poem really expresses how we all feel.

  • 20 years ago

    by Libby M

    Thank you for your nice comments... I got the chance to read your poems, and i really like them... I really like this one too..... Keep up the good work.

    Libby

  • 20 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow...this is such a sad piece! I really liked it!! Great job!!

  • 20 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow...this is such a sad piece! I really liked it!! Great job!!

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