by Bryan Aug 22, 2004
category :
Internet slang /
life, society
In a hospital room, |
i dont know if its the way i feel today or if im a big softie .... but this poem made me cry. but still good job |
by Amy
Im not sure what else i could say that hasnt already been said so ill just say keep writing cuz u have a lot of talent. |
i just re-read this....i understand it now...liek i did before too...but that was before i read your other poem...im real sorry hunnie...i may not know what it means to lose someone soo important..lose them forever...but i get the feeling when i read this poem or your other ones...im sorry hunnie, stay strong, im here if you need me :) |
by helena
awww dats so sad bt so sweet!!! |
by HOLLY ARMER
This was such a tragic piece! It brought tears to my eyes!! A very emotional piece, and very well written! Great job! |