omg i agree with her thats so "Curse" sad!!! :( but it was absolutly beautiful! you write amazing work bryan, i cant wait for your next piece...and its your amazing writing that has me on my tipy toes waiting :) i love your work, please dont stop writing, and eys, i am sorry if this is true...and i didn't quite have tears in my eyes but my throat clogged up liek when ur about to start crying =P lol anyways, brilliant piece, keep writng <333
-Mortalidaga
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Bryan this poem was so sad.. but you did an excellent job with writing it.

~Grace

:'( That was so sad, You definitely lost someone very close to you. Stay strong,

This was such a tragic piece! It brought tears to my eyes!! A very emotional piece, and very well written! Great job!

awww dats so sad bt so sweet!!!

i just re-read this....i understand it now...liek i did before too...but that was before i read your other poem...im real sorry hunnie...i may not know what it means to lose someone soo important..lose them forever...but i get the feeling when i read this poem or your other ones...im sorry hunnie, stay strong, im here if you need me :)
-Mortalidaga
xxxtakecare4alwaysxxx luv you <3

Im not sure what else i could say that hasnt already been said so ill just say keep writing cuz u have a lot of talent.

i dont know if its the way i feel today or if im a big softie .... but this poem made me cry. but still good job