Hmmm, that was a good poem. You can tell you're reading a good poem when you sorta get tingly while you're reading it. Yeah, I liked the idea, and the image of an angel with scabbed wings is one that never occured to me, but is terrifying to think about. Whenever you write "how's things" I think it should be "how're things" because whenever I use that expression, I say "how are things" since "things" is plural, but that isn't really important. Good work.

wow, this is fabulous, amazing work! so creative and powerful, i could picture it, i love your work, keep writing :) excellent!
-Mortalidaga
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excellent.

Strong but no doubt beautiful. Thats all I have to say

xxoo,
alysse

Speechless - amazing thats all i can say your poem touched me so deeply i cant even begin to explain well worth a five id give you a ten if i could!
Thanks for sharing Eirisa

Unlike some of the stuff I have seen this is well worth the time spent reading it, it is an amazing poem... But you probably know it already so yeah. Well done.

Beautifully Written.

That was a beautiful and touching poem. The unusual idea of an angel w/scabbed wings and the visual image i got from your poem was just amazing. I especially loved your rhyme scheme since it was not that of the usual ones you see all the time. Excellent job.

excellent
xnikkix

Wow...thats really good. whoa...haha...no it really is awesome.

wow...an amazing poem. the flow of it was great. keep up the great work!

it's nice =) very original =) im fascinated with angels... i liked ur work.... hope u pass by mine sometimes =) ciao

omg, it was absolutly brilliant, i loved it, i was compelled to keep reading, you have a very good tallent, it was magical, thank you for sharing it with us all, im sure we are all honered to be able to read it, i know i am, nice work.
Ben

wow, you are so talented. i love your poems. keep writing.

i lu it! tell me wen u post another poem!

Wow..this is absolutely the best poem i've read all day...its great..i really enjoyed reading it.

but i do have one suggestions....

"Your wings are broke"

^^in this line try changing "broke" to broken... it would sound much better.

nice work though.5/5