That was an excellent poem! The words flowed very well. Great job. Keep it up! :-)

So Powerful ...

This was an awesome poem. It sucks that so many girls and even guys will relate to this. Though it's sad, the ending is perfect. Excellent write ;)

wow....very good work...very deep...very touchin!

wow great poem... you write really well, i know that alot of people feel that and reading these poems will help alot i just hope you never had to go through it!!

Hey,
your poem is very good but very sad to it mad tears come to my eyes
your a very good wriiten dont ever stop
byenness
cara

wow this was simply breathtaking! marvelous work chloe..keep it up <333
-Mortalidaga
xxxtakecarexxx

I'm at a loss for words....so beautifully put...the words just flowed with power...i feel the pain of always having to smile whern all you feel is pain...

very emotional and powerful poem. I can relate to this poem a lot. Keep up the excellent work. you are very talented

breathtaking. i can totally relate. it was really deep and powerful. your talent shows through this poem. sad but beautiful.
xnikkix

Very deep... my work is not as deep as yours... ^_^x

What the F**K is your problem??! I haven't stolen any poems, and if Michael says that this is his poem, then he is the one lying.

your o good at writing....keep it up!! --joann