by xxurbanxlaydeexx Aug 23, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Mommy please forgive me, mommy i never meant to hurt nobody, |
by Eibutsina
oooo this was chilling! I think you could elaborate on the story a lil tho (not bagging) and just make it a lil more in depth because you have got one amazing story line going i just thinks it a lil short you could do so much with it but its a great start and really original...keep writing xoxo Risa |