Girl, I thought your poem was GREAT! It was descriptive and put a picture in my head of that poor little boy. I hope this didn't really happen. Don't worry if no one comments; you're only a bad poet if YOU think so, but I think you're good. Keep it up!:)

This is really great. Your an incredible poet; keep up the great work!

PS: Thanks for commenting on so much of my poetry! I appreciate it!