by *Elizabeth*
hey Marta! another GREAT POEM!!! I love how you put your words together..so beautiful!!!! LOVED IT!!! |
by beaver
very well written, well done. |
by Bryce Ellner
You showed great description of someone would be feeling and that always makes a poem good. |
That was really really good. Cannot find a fault in it. Excellent work. |
by JS
excellent work. I can relate to this poem. It practically described my exact feelings. Keep up the excellent work! You're an amazing writer |
by Sherry Lynn
Wow, such talent for being 14. I know exactly how it feels to always think that your fat, for I myself suffer from the same disorder that you discribe, it has been fifteen years now since I was last hospitalized, but I still see nothing but a lard of fat everytime I look in a mirror; I even refuse to step on scales to this day! Keep up the great work. |
by leyana
very nice...very true to what im feelin ryte now...it was nice readin that poem keep up the talented work..stay strong hun |
by jennifer
Your poems are amazing and they make me think of me at 14 and where I am now, hang in there things can get better remember pople love you on this site |