I wonder if you feel the same way that i do

by Mephastophilis   Aug 24, 2004


I stare at you,
From across the room.
If only you knew how I really feel…

I feel so helpless when I with you
Oh I really love the little things you do.
The way you smile, send me shivers
And your cordial touch makes me quiver
I lose myself in your deep, dark eyes
Your truly divine, passionate and wise
I love your hugs, I love your kisses
You alone fulfil all of my wishes

I love you in so many ways; I could not state them all
Don’t know how I survived so many years of not know knowing you at all
I can’t believe I did not know of your being,
I can’t believe that once you meant absolutely nothing to me

I wonder if you know I’d be lost without you
That if you ever left me it would break my heart in two
I wouldn’t stalk you, wouldn’t commit suicide
I would just be empty, not dead but worse, not alive
I would let you go, because I love you
I would sit at home praying you would come back soon
But hopefully that day will never come
Hopefully you and I will always be as one

… As I snap back to reality, I see that you are staring at me
I wonder what you are thinking, I wonder how you feel, I wonder if you feel the same way that I do.

Please comment on what you thinK of it. Its nice to get feedback

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  • 20 years ago

    by David

    Wow, Molly, you are sooo romantic.
    I wish I could write love poems like this. As I was reading your words, I kept remembering your beautiful face on your profile. God I almost kissed the screen. lol
    Beautiful. Im going to have to read this to my girl friend sometime.
    You have a few typos, Im sure if you re-read the poem out loud you would catch them.

    Very romantic and emotional piece.

    ~David

  • 20 years ago

    by mike

    nice poem

  • 20 years ago

    by Mephastophilis

    this was the first poem i hav ever posted so it was really nice 2 get such nice comments and i'll definelty be writing more- hope you enjoy

  • 20 years ago

    by Zayda

    Hey, this is a great poem, i can truly relate to wut ur sayin, i truly do... ok, im lookin forward to get to write some other of ur stuff since i bet its great, ok, i'd b so glad u commented on my poems... luvs ya, Zayda