Hey, this is a great poem, i can truly relate to wut ur sayin, i truly do... ok, im lookin forward to get to write some other of ur stuff since i bet its great, ok, i'd b so glad u commented on my poems... luvs ya, Zayda

this was the first poem i hav ever posted so it was really nice 2 get such nice comments and i'll definelty be writing more- hope you enjoy

nice poem

Wow, Molly, you are sooo romantic.
I wish I could write love poems like this. As I was reading your words, I kept remembering your beautiful face on your profile. God I almost kissed the screen. lol
Beautiful. Im going to have to read this to my girl friend sometime.
You have a few typos, Im sure if you re-read the poem out loud you would catch them.

Very romantic and emotional piece.

~David