by My Obsεssion Aug 25, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Oh firefly |
WOW!! Excellent! Great comparison... |
I like all your poems. They are so awesome. I rate them all 5 even though I havn't got to read them all yet. |
by Jacki
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by Robyn Park
I really liked how you compared your life to the firefly's. It ws different, but written well. The rhyme scheme was different also, it seemed like you rhymed when you could, but didn't make the whole poem just about rhyming. Nice work. |
by julie
WOW! omg that is really excellent, i love the way you have used the firefly so different and original, excellent! |