Dear Firefly

by My Obsεssion   Aug 25, 2004


Oh firefly
Flying in the night sky
Tail lit bright
You are quite a sight

Lost in your beauty
Basking in the cover of night
I admire you
And feel an unexplainable closeness

I reach out my hands
To capture you inside them
Then I stretch one out
And let you rest upon it

Oh firefly
Flying in the night sky
Tail lit bright
You remind me so much of me

For just like you I am lost
Flying solo, all alone
Blindly searching the night sky
Beacon lit, hoping to find my mate

You rest there on my hand
Waiting for fate to intervene
For your mate to fly your way
Attracted by your beacon

But lady luck doesn’t seem
To be on your side tonight
And so, for the moment
We both sit here broken-hearted, waiting

But unlike me
You fly free
To go and make things happen for you
Instead of just sitting here all blue

It’s in this moment I admire you
I admire your strength
The courage found in one so little
That can’t be found in me

It’s as I try
To snatch you back
That you remind me of the one I love
Just sitting there, hovering just out of reach

If I could catch you I would keep you close
I’d keep you right there in my pocket
Or maybe I would keep your likeness
Around my neck inside a locket

I would treat you good
With all the love I have to give
I would try my best to protect you
If only I could catch you

If only you would give me a chance
Instead of hovering just out of reach
I make one last grab to try and catch you
And at last I do succeed

But woe is me
It cannot be
I never meant for you to die
But I have killed you my dear firefly

And still we two are alike
As we both lie here crushed
Still both hoping to find
The one we call our mate

**Don't quite know what I was thinking when I wrote this poem. Even I find it very...interesting lol. Either way votes and comments are always appreciated**

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    WOW!! Excellent! Great comparison...
    I love this:
    It's as I try to snatch you back
    That you remind me of the one I love
    Just sitting there, hovering just out of reach

    and then... at the end.... the bug dies... and that's exactly how it is when you realize that a love can never be... AWESOME!!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Katie McCullick

    I like all your poems. They are so awesome. I rate them all 5 even though I havn't got to read them all yet.

  • 20 years ago

    by Jacki


    How true this line is:

    But unlike me
    You fly free

    I've never thought of compairing my life to a firefly but how perfect it is. I thought this poem was unique, and wonderful. YOu use great descriptions like the beacon to find a mate. I had great visuals. ANd also wow what an imagination you must have :). I loved this poem you did an excellent job!

  • 20 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    I really liked how you compared your life to the firefly's. It ws different, but written well. The rhyme scheme was different also, it seemed like you rhymed when you could, but didn't make the whole poem just about rhyming. Nice work.

  • 20 years ago

    by julie

    WOW! omg that is really excellent, i love the way you have used the firefly so different and original, excellent!