Great poem Michelle. I remember when I got my heart broken. I couldn't eat, I couldn't sleep. Sometimes it felt like I couldn't even breathe. Everybody kept telling me that there was other fish in the sea. I hated it. But your poem is full of that terrible emotion and I am sorry that it has happened to you. The poem tells the story perfectly, and I am very impressed with your work and how it flowed so perfectly. And about the guy, don't worry, you will find someone who treats you like you deserve to be treated. Great poem.

oh hun i felt your pain - dont worry him leaving you has simply left an open space in your life - for someone more deserving - lovely poem thanks for sharing Eirisa xoxo

aww thats so touching...i could feel the emotions <333
-Mortalidaga
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great poem flowed nicely. keep up the good work

Excellent.
I feel the same way about my ex, only I still can't let him go :'(

Aww sweetie I'm sorry about your heartbreak. But you did a really good job at writing your feelings out. You're right.. life does still go on.. and even though he's gone, life can still be just as special, or maybe even more. Keep your head up! =)

~Grace